In 4th grade, we are learning about the difference between retelling and summarizing a story. Retelling has lots more details and may contain dialogue, like the students' retelling of "Cinderella" below.
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| Ms. Moore's favorite retelling is "Ever After," starring Drew Barrymore. Photo from thewonderfulworldofcinema.wordpress.com. |
Retelling
Once upon a time, there was a happy couple and they had a child named Ella. Then Ella’s mom was mortally sick and died. Then the dad married a very rude and sassy woman with two crazy children. The stepmother liked her two children, but made Ella do chores.Summary
After we retold Cinderella in 426 words, it was time to summarize it in a couple of sentences. The method I taught the 4th graders is Somebody Wanted But So Then. Here are some of the summaries they came up with:Cinderellawanted to go to the ball,but the stepmother didn't want her to.So the fairy godmother came and got her a dress and said it would expire at 12, like milk.Then she went to the ball and danced with the prince.The stepsisterswanted to dance with the prince,but Cinderella got to instead.So they were surprised to see her there.Then they got a taste of their own medicine.The stepmotherwanted her daughters to go to the ball and meet the prince,but Cinderella came and danced with him.So the stepsisters were mad.Then the clock struck 12.
















































